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Tender Years

In early years I depended on you You were big and strong my only hero In my tender eyes you knew what to do When it comes to life, we start at zero Gaining more each day, I learned how to walk You were big and stong my only hero As time would go on, I would hear you talk They were painful words that you gave to me Gaining more each day, I learned how to walk I could not imagine things I would see The World you gave me was devoid of sun They were painful words that you gave to me Eventually I would learn how to run I was never meant to live like a slave The World you gave me was devoid of sun God is my hero, I've learned to be brave I was never meant to live like a slave In my early years, I depended on you In my tender eyes you knew what to do

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/17/2012 8:25:00 AM
wow, this is a wonderful terzanelle you have delivered us. At first I wondered where the questionku was, but this is for a different contest! I need to do the terzanelle contest! they make for awesome poems! you addressed tender years topic brilliantly.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/17/2012 8:31:00 AM
You are funny Andrea! Thanks for the comment.
Date: 12/17/2012 8:14:00 AM
Beautiful and surely complete, a perfect Terzanelle. Though I do have to point out that in the forms section of PoetrySoup a Terzanelle ending was different than what you have done here. I've noticed that you have done it a little different and I just wanted to point that out because I did mine for your contest according to the form they gave here on PoetrySoup. I hope that is alright, because that is correct too, I don't know if any one is right, or both are ok? Anyway this poem is excellent!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/17/2012 8:31:00 AM
Both are okay as far as I know Russell. No worries.
Date: 12/17/2012 7:29:00 AM
A beautiful poem... there is nothing more to say, my friend! Kudos... Jack
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/17/2012 7:31:00 AM
Thanks Jack
Date: 12/17/2012 7:16:00 AM
Intense poem. From such an experience a weaker man would have been broken. But no matter what stage we are in life we are never fully independent. Hopefully those we depend on are pillars of support. I enjoyed your poem.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/17/2012 7:24:00 AM
I have much to be thankful for, I have been given so very much. Thanks for your warm words.

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