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Tender and sweet revised

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Tender and sweet revised

Tender and sweet was my first date.
My inocence brought awkwardness,
to this fait.
Alone, with my friends all gone
in his car for the first time,
I blush at a glance at a little romance
as he brushed his hand against mine.
We were meeting our friends
at the movies in the mall.
once we were there
it was less awkward after all.
when we arrived the girls all gathered in
innocently joking about our first dates how they began.
The fellows got tickets, popcorn and drinks,
while the girls all gossiped by the bathroom sinks.
We giggled and blushed , and giggled some more.
We gathered our emotions as we walked through the door.
My date was so nice, Norman, he was a dear.
He stretched out his arm and held me near.
As the movie went on, they were playing a song
the movie was "Pretty in Pink".
Then He held my hand it was positively grand
as we walk back out from our seats.
When he took me home I was nervously blushed,
as I thanked him for the nice date.
Then he leaned in, as I was looking at him.
He hugged me and then kissed my cheek.

Ahhhh..Tender and Sweet  memories of yesteryear.

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  1. Date: 7/16/2011 7:56:00 AM
    Gosh, so few guys these days would simply kiss your cheek and be so sweet. Nice story. I take it this was the 8o's! Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 7/15/2011 3:41:00 PM
    My congratulations on this win in the contest of Carol, treasa

    Jarvis Avatar Treasa Jarvis
    Date: 7/15/2011 10:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Dr.Ram..God bless..
  1. Date: 7/15/2011 1:58:00 PM
    Congrats Treasa on your super second place win in first date with this dynamic delight ..luv..enjoy..

    Jarvis Avatar Treasa Jarvis
    Date: 7/15/2011 10:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda God Bless:)
  1. Date: 7/15/2011 12:48:00 PM
    Congratulations on your placement in my contest and thank you for supporting my contest Treasa. Love, Carol

    Jarvis Avatar Treasa Jarvis
    Date: 7/15/2011 10:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Carol for this great win..You are such an encourager..God bless you my friend.