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As I sat on the bed, and opened the box I fondled the keepsake, in the palm of my hand It is tied to a youth that I never lost Often the memories may be callused by time Some have been polished. Tho' some may be gone into the reverie, where I cannot climb Smooth as the dream, that I've kept like a glove, wrapped tightly in tissue, and precious to hold, is one little stone of no value, but love With a glint of the morning, and the blue of the sky sapphire veins, and gold undertones. Inside are hints of a story once told The heat can be captured like a piece of the sun I remember a day, with a radiant glow when the ocean was changing, and storms on the way Thundering sounds, and in-coming waves that swept us away, to world of our own It washed up from nowhere, and you reached with your hand and picked up this keepsake, to put in my own The memory lingers, re-savored, when found A stone of no worth, except for the love There in the sand, as if it were gold much brighter with colors, than all other stones A talisman treasure that I'll always own Shaped smooth by time, and polished by tides Taking me back to the glint in your eyes
___________________________ 1/22/16

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Date: 8/18/2016 8:05:00 PM
Beautifully recounted memory using Silent One's chosen words. P.S. You own a chrysalis? We used to catch butterflies with nets made of wire hangers and everyday plastic bags.... ;-)
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Date: 8/18/2016 4:24:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog After you. With Love SKAT
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Date: 8/18/2016 4:20:00 PM
Such beautiful memories Carrie Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/14/2016 11:31:00 AM
Hi Carrie, Congratulations on your win in the contest. An excellent write Carrie....Vlad.
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Date: 3/14/2016 12:34:00 AM
Really well written Carrie. I enjoyed this read. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 3/13/2016 11:17:00 AM
Wonderful piece of art this poetry is! Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/13/2016 10:35:00 AM
Carrie, Congratulations on your win. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "Names on Poetry Soup" if you like. It would be nice to hear from you and all those who I honored with a placement. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/23/2016 10:33:00 AM
Oh Carrie, you did a marvelous job on this challenge! You are very right about how interesting all of us wrote such different poems based on the same ten words. I love this and you did a great job. You are very talented!! *smiles* -luloo
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Date: 1/23/2016 9:48:00 AM
Such a beautiful memory you describe, Carrie. And you wonderfully wove in Silent One's required words so well. You fulfilled this challenge above and beyond! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/22/2016 12:44:00 PM
Very beautiful, Carrie. I saw the whole scene through your words.
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