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Tempting

Tempting Bulging curves Fleshly rounding mountains Roaming eyes see her shapely form Cleavage

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2010 10:25:00 AM

Ooh la la, ME LIKES this one on cleavage. That si something I got plenty of!! One advantage of not being a skinny minny! Hey how cool your mom was a teacher. Me too!! an Okie! I am from Iowa! LUv, Andrea

Daver Austin

Date: 6/6/2010 8:54:00 AM

How bulging are those curves? How deep the cleavage? My imaginative eyes are roaming. Love, daver

Aneysa Churchwell

Date: 6/5/2010 7:09:00 PM

lol gee what was on yuor mind....better yet who? lol nice write

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/5/2010 5:17:00 PM

Well penned picture of a sensuous woman

Princess Corazon

Date: 6/5/2010 4:52:00 PM

um.......i like the way you worded it. what was you inspiration?

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/5/2010 4:29:00 PM

Well, I suppose that this is about a woman or could it be mountains or clouds? Keep the creative pen flowing.Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/5/2010 4:29:00 PM

Nice portrait of a voluptuous woman Marie.. we have so many on the Soup who would enjoy this one.. very creative... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/5/2010 4:13:00 PM

enjoyed, have anice one,..pd..

James Fraser

Date: 6/5/2010 3:21:00 PM

McWow Marie, lovely Cinquain - oh my images, images >> James