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Temptation

The devil is your helpmeet when you squeeze your P's and Q's, when you dabble in black magic and recalibrate the fuse. Transgression will befall you as you ply your wicked trade, yours or someone else's 'til the debt to sin is paid. Criminals, malingerers, and those with crooked hearts will wriggle through the sacraments, upset the applecarts. They'll paint you in the darkest light and daub your face with blood, play your insecurities and sway you from the Good. Don't compromise your trembling heart to acclimate his will, remember he is waiting for your innocence to spill.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/18/2012 8:06:00 AM
Yay Yay Yay -- this is sensational. Where have I been for the past week. More More.
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Date: 6/14/2012 6:46:00 PM
very good,,, was raised catholic,, I feel your words,,,, you have a blessed day Keith ;} and thank you for reading Sweet Ecstasy .
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Date: 6/12/2012 10:19:00 PM
wonderful write Keith,this is a world of temptation behind every door,peep through the key hole before entering,lol,loved it
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Date: 6/11/2012 7:11:00 PM
Been away too long from the wonderful poetry and messages here at PS - I truely loved this poem and the message to resist temptation - very well written! ~Trudy~
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Date: 6/11/2012 6:54:00 PM
It sure is different than the Temptation I wrote!
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Date: 6/11/2012 6:53:00 PM
Wow, you make every word count and make me shrink with the message. Your wonderful vocabulary gives such amazing energy to what you are putting across here. Always excited to read these wonderful creations!
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Date: 6/11/2012 3:47:00 PM
Yes, powerful indeed! Words which coalesce into a great body of work! Tanya
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Date: 6/11/2012 3:17:00 PM
whoa! this is a very powerful warning! too bad those with "crooked hearts" (love that phrase!) will not be the ones heeding your advice. i absolutely love the first verse - "recalibrate the fuse" is brilliant, keith!
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