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beneath the stars, arms gaily twirl in rainfall… a mellow dance, please with fireflies dressed in silken gauze this evening pours a rhapsody… barefoot, we drench in tempo of gust as the sky becomes our canopy kissing , melting through shapeless forms. SHWEET Free Verse Contest of Andrea Dietrich 7/26/2015

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 9/2/2015 11:28:00 AM

Love it :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/1/2015 10:25:00 PM

A visual delight my friend. Congrats on a fine win! A7

Laura Leiser

Date: 7/30/2015 2:20:00 PM

I love this romantic, rainfall story, Nette! Congrats on your win, 7. :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/30/2015 10:13:00 AM

Oh the romance !!! Just perfect and shweet as a soft summer rain !!! Congrats to you Nette!!

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/30/2015 7:07:00 AM

Oh I would love to see you dance in the rain like this, your images are so real I can feel them! :) Very beautiful Nette ;)

Skat A

Date: 7/30/2015 3:33:00 AM

Nette, Congratulations on your SHWEET Free Verse Win. **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/30/2015 2:40:00 AM

Nette, congratulations on your win.... LINDA

Jan Allison

Date: 7/30/2015 1:58:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Lee Carter

Date: 7/30/2015 12:20:00 AM

Love your rain dance congrats on your win! ~lee

Lycia Harding

Date: 7/29/2015 11:54:00 PM

Now that is SHWEET! Congrats on your win, dear Nette. xoxo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2015 11:40:00 PM

a beautiful dance of rain, Nette!! Love the romantic aspect and the sky as a canopy. Congrats for a well deserved top win.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/29/2015 11:39:00 PM

Wonderful romantic masterpiece nette! Congrats on ur win! A perfect 7 for this passion marvel!

Daver Austin

Date: 7/27/2015 2:57:00 PM

Nette, this little gem is better without the picture. The wetness comes through. Love, daver

Daver Austin

Date: 7/27/2015 2:51:00 PM

Yes, nice soft rhythmic flow and wet. Love, daver

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/27/2015 8:35:00 AM

Nette, I want to be in there too dancing under the rain!!! weeeeeeeeee, why the date?? :D I just miss your company!!!~Olive ELoisa =') hugsss! thanks for my placement.. :D!

Kash Poet

Date: 7/27/2015 5:19:00 AM

Beautifull freeverse!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/27/2015 1:58:00 AM

Excellent. Exquisite write. Enjoyed reading it. TFS

Ken Carroll

Date: 7/26/2015 7:12:00 PM

Well crafted rhythmic write Nette.. Good luck!

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/26/2015 2:51:00 PM

One can feel the tempo, so visual is this wonderful poem.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/26/2015 6:23:00 AM

Drenched in the beauty of this free verse I am, Nette! Lowering of standards is never an alternative for you! Well expressed romantic tempo! hugs // paul

Ashley Conte

Date: 7/26/2015 2:33:00 AM

Gee,the beauty of being able to be caught up in a moment of free thought. You captured that sense of spontaneity with this alluring verse. " Melting through shapeless forms", got me!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/25/2015 4:46:00 PM

Your words dance across the page Nette - stunning imagery as ever - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7

Franco Gonza

Date: 7/25/2015 4:28:00 PM

Makes me want to relive my youth as this fluent, radiant poem thrills through every line of drip-drop delight!

Amelie Mara

Date: 7/25/2015 2:34:00 PM

There is such movement in this exquisite poem. And so magical, delicate, breathtaking I feel like dancing in the rain!

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/25/2015 2:24:00 PM

Hello Nette, Best of Luck in the contest!! This is a truly radiant write with each of the verses melting into place. Excellent!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary