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God, were you happy today? Did any of us make you upset? God, we try In our best ability What did you specifically like to do today? God we love you helping us Especially when we are at a crisis Do you have any crisis God? I don’t think you do God thanks for giving me that today I appreciate it Lord You have made my life a happy one And I thank you God what do you wish for us? We are helping others We are being loving What else Lord? Tell us okay? Love you so much Father Have a beautiful day tomorrow Yours

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Date: 5/29/2012 10:30:00 AM
Hello Toquyen, this is a really nice write which sounds as if you are truly talking to your father...thank you for sharing... karen
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 5/29/2012 11:23:00 AM
Thanks Karen. I am :)) Love, Toquyen
Date: 5/29/2012 7:58:00 AM
i love your mind Toquyen,boil the Soup,lol
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 5/29/2012 8:05:00 AM
Yes, cooking it for Him lol. Love, Toquyen

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