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Teen Mother

Girl Young, pregnant Crying, hiding, contemplating Student, daughter, girlfriend, woman Worrying, praying, dreaming Painful, joyful Mother ~Christopher Thor Britt

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Date: 11/20/2013 7:45:00 PM
Congrat... Awesome win...PD
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Date: 11/16/2013 2:28:00 PM
Wonderful, Christopher, you capture the transition from girl to mother well. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/16/2013 2:22:00 PM
Ahh!! Very descriptive of the girl becoming an adult but within is still the girl..Congrats.Sara
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Date: 11/15/2013 2:17:00 PM
So much emotion and perspective captured in so few words. Congrats, Christopher!
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Date: 11/15/2013 3:05:00 AM
great life stages of a girl- woman.. sweet cheers to you, cnristopher!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/14/2013 11:28:00 PM
this is great how you transitioned her into motherhood, adulthood. Congrats.
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Date: 11/14/2013 7:31:00 PM
such a true scenario in today's world....congrats on your win :) great write!
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Date: 11/14/2013 2:26:00 PM
An original topic, and done to perfection. Well done, Christopher.......congrats on a winning poem!
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Date: 11/14/2013 11:23:00 AM
congrats on a great win Chris
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Date: 11/14/2013 4:54:00 AM
congrats on your win Chris xx
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Date: 11/13/2013 10:10:00 PM
Congrats Moo. Good job Roger
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 11/13/2013 10:27:00 PM
Thanks, Ger.
Date: 11/13/2013 9:57:00 PM
Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for participating, christopher
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 11/13/2013 10:04:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Mehta. Your contest was a fun opportunity for me to try out a new style of poetry. My brother, Roger Horsch, had challenged me to give it a try. CTB
Date: 11/6/2013 4:18:00 PM
Diamonds are forever- especially poetic ones!
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Date: 11/2/2013 11:44:00 PM
This is an excellent diamante poem my dear friend Christopher! I love it and so enjoyed. Good luck in the contest! Thanks a lot for sharing and your lovely congratulatory comments on my poem! love and big hugs, Leonora
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 11/13/2013 10:04:00 PM
Thank you Leonora.
Date: 11/2/2013 7:28:00 PM
I was unfamiliar with this form but like it very much as you have penned it. More could not be said with fewer words. Mark
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Date: 11/1/2013 6:16:00 PM
So much truth and deep. Very well penned.
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Date: 10/31/2013 1:43:00 PM
amazing life stages well expressed in diamante form... creative, chris!..:)
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Date: 10/31/2013 3:31:00 AM
Well written...dilenma of a growing girl, Kechi
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Date: 10/31/2013 3:25:00 AM
Wow! A deep poem that has the real meaning hidden....nicely penned! Kudos! Bob- Based On Belief.
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Date: 10/31/2013 1:43:00 AM
wow, that's an outstanding one!
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Date: 10/30/2013 9:45:00 PM
Thanks for the entry, Christopher
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