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Tediously Undignified

You cannot take from me that which I have yet to discover Although I walk upon a crumbling wall it is you who fortified my ignorance Witness my strength grow exponentially as I venture further beyond your reach All that you are has become tedious I have discovered my own significance My indifference somehow diminishes you and your response is less than dignified December 12, 2016 For Laura Loo's Quote II contest.

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/7/2017 12:43:00 PM

Whoa, Richard. This is powerful mojo here. This kind of pure wisdom must be dispensed w/care. Lol! Great fantabulous poem, my friend. Here are two 7 ups for this wonderful poem. Love and peace to you.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/20/2016 1:53:00 AM

This is Frank and well worded, Richard:) I see it has won, congratulations:)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/20/2016 9:31:00 AM

I appreciate all the visits.

John Hamilton

Date: 12/18/2016 8:27:00 AM

Nice win, congrats, knew it was good!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/18/2016 8:59:00 AM

Thanks John.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/18/2016 5:11:00 AM

Life, hey? Congratulations on your win, Kai

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/18/2016 8:59:00 AM

Thanks Kai.

Afzal Nusker

Date: 12/17/2016 11:58:00 PM

You have said it all with the powerful punch of your words. Imposing way of expression. Congrats on your win, Richard.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/18/2016 9:00:00 AM

Much appreciated Afzal.

Anu Nayak

Date: 12/17/2016 1:16:00 PM

Dear Richard, awesome:) Congrats on your win!!indifference to the tedious makes a significant difference!Bliss we get to enjoy! ! love, Anu:)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/18/2016 9:01:00 AM

Thanks Anu.;0) I'm glad you enjoyed this one.

Paloma P

Date: 12/15/2016 8:28:00 AM

Like getting punched in the gut, formidably potent poetry!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/16/2016 7:32:00 AM

Thanks for visiting Paloma.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 12/14/2016 11:58:00 AM

Hi Rick: Great poem! Best of luck in the contest

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/15/2016 7:49:00 AM

Thanks Ralph.

Mama Bear

Date: 12/14/2016 11:36:00 AM

Nicely expressed Good luck in the contest Gets a 7 from me Love Mom

Akkina Downing

Date: 12/13/2016 9:41:00 PM

Very powerful...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/14/2016 12:04:00 AM

Thanks Akkina.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/13/2016 8:04:00 PM

I love the strength in this piece, Richard. As usual, you have found the right mix of words to convey an indomitable spirit. :) Didn't know you've posted quite a few poems. I haven't been on for a bit. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/13/2016 8:18:00 PM

Yes, you have been missed. Hugs Rick.