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teddy bear

i just 
want to be
a sweet talking 
teddy bear
inside golden
honey drops
in dripping feelings
upon the softest
of emotions

buttering you up
so we can
sandwich together
sweetly tickling
the taste buds
sparkling roses
blooming beautiful
crowned queen
of the deep ocean

softly rainbow colouring
one's soul
as waves 
unfold out
whispering in winds 
a tune 
played upon 
the deepest organ

Copyright © liam mcdaid

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  1. Date: 10/21/2013 10:16:00 AM
    WOW! you are some kind of Teddy Bear. I collect Teddy Bears. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 3:22:00 PM
    awhh, you really groove, liam... catch me, my hear is melting!.. charming read all the way!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 2:45:00 PM
    I love your line, "a tune played upon the deepest organ". This is a very romantic and heartwarming poem, Liam. This would be perfect for Valentine's Day. Beautiful writing!...Thank you very much for the nice comments.

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 9:19:00 AM
    Teddy bears are a girl s best friend..Sweet and cuddly poem.

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 9:08:00 AM
    - I love Teddy Bears & your sweet, beautiful and romantic poems, Liam .... - Always nice to read!! - Have a great Sunday! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)