Tease
secure
in the advantage : submission
(the natural eye sees upsidedown)
vulnerable - in
tangible - don't
see me for what i do but who i am
separate (sanctity from sanity)
please is ---------------- a tease with
bent knees with
a mouth that foams, hangs open,
---------------------- alone ---------
come home, she cried, that night,
just before he ---- died --- despite
(quite creative)
(com)motion diluted in----oh, sense,
begging for
betrayal
Copyright © Rachel Hart | Year Posted 2010
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