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Tears of My Mother

When my mother moaned As she witnessed her daughter depart this life I was touched by the glitter in her tears Tears of emancipated love, The sort ordinary in a woman That is not faked or imperfect; But my father admonished me That her tears were psychologically adulterated, That her tears were meant to delude me- After all fatality of a son is more devastating. I did not accept as true what father told me For I knew the lie in male psychology So I ran from him without looking back And followed mother to her bedroom And I wiped away the tears from her face: She was my mother And I was her son I could not let her cry alone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/17/2020 10:43:00 AM
"She was my mother And I was her son I could not let her cry alone." So genuinely expressed the huge Love that bonds a mother to a son and a daughter! Your poetry touches the soul of your reader, HONESTY! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 3/5/2018 11:24:00 PM
Oh what profound words of yours Honesty. Your mother must be very grateful to have such a lovely son. Bravo....Maria
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Date: 3/22/2013 7:14:00 PM
This is profound, Honesty...obviously your Mother's gentleness is passed on to you. I love this. Annalise
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Date: 5/26/2012 11:29:00 AM
" very deep words here, but moving I Am touched and pleased i read this. Termendious job Honesy! This one I will remember for years to come. and many there after.....
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Date: 12/5/2011 4:51:00 PM
Oh" I so like this very much , I've written 2 maybe three for my mother ,, nicely worded ;} have a blessed day!
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Date: 3/2/2011 2:34:00 AM
This is very touching,Honesty.Sweet piece of art.Belated thanks for congrats.
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Date: 2/23/2011 8:41:00 AM
Oh no=0( This is sad... But written very well. I can say coming form an Jamaican American background..I was taught the same thing about tears. In my family the men don't cry. A sad untruth to pass down to our children. Good write!
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Date: 2/15/2011 12:46:00 AM
Honesty Oimbo - beautiful end wiping mothers tears... perhaps the most divine duty. thnx for for reading & liking my verse "Me still as statue". Luv & Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 2/13/2011 4:42:00 AM
a riveting piece that awes me no end, honesty.. the way your thoughts flowed to give it a last impact is astoundsing! great stuff! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/12/2011 1:39:00 PM
This poem is beautiful, the love for your mother is overwhelming, I adore the lines "and I wiped away the tears from her face, she was my mother, and I was her son" does it get any more beautiful than this~~
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Date: 2/12/2011 8:29:00 AM
Most touching and sensitive HONESTY in your tender words of emotion .. such deep thoughts conveyed to paper my friend.. I was very close to my own Mother and can imagine how she would have reacted to bury a child .. good luck if for the free verse contest with luv..
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Date: 2/12/2011 4:50:00 AM
Great work..If based on truth, great kindness and understanding that you have as a person and son..The loss of a child is devastation for a parent..The parent should go first never have to bury a child..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Your kind remarks are appreciated..Sara
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Date: 2/11/2011 10:35:00 PM
Very touching Honesty. I cannot picture a father saying that at such a time but I can see the son wanting to show his love for his mother. Thank you for your comment on my little entry. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/11/2011 10:14:00 PM
i am sobbing, this poem is wonderful
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Date: 2/8/2011 6:11:00 PM
beautiful and very profound, lessons learn't from real life. love this . Harry
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Date: 2/8/2011 9:39:00 AM
She was my mother And I was her son I could not let her cry alone! A great impact, your last lines summing up, Honesty! Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/7/2011 10:10:00 PM
wow, this is very touching and heartfelt, Honesty. I really liked seeing this one as I get ready to leave here for the night. Luv, Andrea Ps is that your real name or a pen name?
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Date: 2/6/2011 1:33:00 PM
Touching and moving memories of your mother you recollected and paid a fine tribute to her, Honesty
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Date: 2/6/2011 3:18:00 AM
Beautiful, touching, and so sad. Thanks for your comment
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