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Tears of Destiny

I gaze on beauties Wrapped inside imperfectness Unveil the missing line Of this life story Sigh on nature As Doubted traveler In the midst of storm Await whispers To redirect the path of life As an unborn Soul Again to be revealed A new chapter of life Insignia Tears of destiny If this a poem then am dreamin 15 jul 11

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Dinda Minardi

Date: 1/4/2012 9:24:00 AM

I forgot to say Happy New Year and rate this :)

Isa Mahrie
Date: 1/6/2012 12:46:00 AM

thanks happy new to you year and all the member too :)

Dinda Minardi

Date: 1/3/2012 8:04:00 AM

a deep meaning it has, this poem. Beauties wrapped inside imperfectness. very clever, Isa :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/2/2012 5:44:00 AM

Good poem Isa - like it :)! Happy 2012!OXOX love Anne-Lise

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/2/2012 5:43:00 AM

You pose as "The Thinker " for your Avatar..how cool Rodan. You leave much to the mind as I unwrap the missing line of your life story. Glad u are posting again...love the closing lines. Is there a part 2?

Isa Mahrie
Date: 1/3/2012 3:23:00 AM

Thanks Gwen ... actually that pic taken by a friend in Bali ... :)