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Tears of Blood

In my veins flows the blood that drips from the pain and misery of my lost sorrow. Drip, drip in never ending streams of crimson, tears flowing from swollen eyes. The dark of sad lonely nights calls my soul. I feel not the pain as it blackens my ebon glass heart. Never will I try again to feel joy as once in my youth I had. It is but a sad dream, a lost desire, gone in the fall of each blood filled tear that I cry. 12/04/15

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Date: 8/19/2016 9:36:00 AM
Wonderful creation...I'm fascinated by the presentation and the words. Congrats on your placing. :D Sunita
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Date: 8/18/2016 9:09:00 PM
This is really amazing James, so I know like everyone said creative, so I'll say inventive because I think you actually did something that's not been done, or at least I've never seen it. Magnificent work of art!
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Date: 8/18/2016 7:28:00 PM
Hi, James, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "Don't Come" if you'd like. Enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/10/2016 11:30:00 PM
Awesome poem. I love the way it's constructed. :)
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James Inman
Date: 1/11/2016 11:36:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 12/4/2015 5:25:00 PM
This is a deep sad write____sincerely, I love how it was constructed.........A.M.
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James Inman
Date: 1/11/2016 11:37:00 AM
Thank you Afolabi. Sorry for missing your comment earlier.
Date: 12/4/2015 2:59:00 PM
As Jan said, below, "Wow"! Very creative! All the best in the contest. Sandra
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James Inman
Date: 12/4/2015 8:57:00 PM
Sandra, thank you. I like Wow!
Date: 12/4/2015 2:25:00 PM
Wow James I love your creativity - a fabulous entry for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/5/2015 7:56:00 AM
I am fine but the Island is taking a severe battering - if you see my blog you will see the pics:-( hugs Jan xx
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James Inman
Date: 12/4/2015 8:55:00 PM
Thank you Jan. How are you?
Date: 12/4/2015 2:07:00 PM
- Sad tear drops ............. well done, James !!! - I wish you a peaceful and great weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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James Inman
Date: 12/4/2015 8:54:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely comment, Anne-Lise. Hope you have a gentle and beautiful weekend yourself.

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