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Tears of a Raven

She left the “unkindness”, descended upon a mossy knoll Over looking the darkness of the moonless, misty graveyard The ebony clouds shielding the glistening tears of the Raven Tears of LOVE for those that, waiting : Sing at the gates of Heaven Tears of Sorrow for those, unbelievers, who will spend Eternity in Hell Do not show me the face of despair, the tears of forever unknown : Her tears roll down the contours of her cheeks falling to the Ground Creating the Zenith of an Everlasting ROSE never to be seen As Roses grow where Her tears splashed upon the wanting Earth She spreads her wings and returns to the “Congress” from wince She came Darker and Lighter than the rest of the “death flock” soaring ABOVE Inspired by the Contest " Among the Dead " Sponsored by ~ A Rambling Poet ~ Dedicated to the ones I LOVE ; " Recieved by the LORD " By HGarvey Daniel Esquire 5th Place

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Date: 2/24/2011 11:44:00 AM
I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations HG. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/19/2011 7:11:00 AM
Many congratulations HG on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 2/18/2011 6:42:00 PM
Great write HGarvey!Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 2/18/2011 6:19:00 AM
Excellent lines about the tears of love and sorrow. Great story behind your poem, H.G. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:22:00 AM
Wonderful story, dear HG. Many congrat's on your big win. Lainie
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:24:00 PM
Well done in Constance's contest with this fine entry. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:22:00 PM
Very, very nice. Congratulaions on your win. Love, (Mom) Joyce
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:03:00 PM
Congraaaaaaaatulations HG, on this great honor fifth place win. agape, Moses
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:31:00 PM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Constance, HG
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your super fine win in the "Among the Dead" Contest, HG! Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/17/2011 4:46:00 PM
Congrats HG my silent beau on your wonderful winning poem in Among the Dead with this exceptional entry luv.. enjoy another grand victory with luv ..forever your "Sweetheart" ...
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Date: 1/24/2011 6:13:00 AM
Wow! Sensational my friend. Lainie
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Date: 1/23/2011 4:58:00 PM
Most excellent write and a sure winner! Light & Love
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Date: 1/19/2011 5:29:00 AM
I am reading such amazing poetry this morning HG my forever friend. I am glad yours is among the ones I have had the pleasure to read today. I wish you a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/19/2011 3:13:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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