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Tears From the Sun

The painted sky weeps under a sad sun A field of mud the place our souls shall dwell As scattered gray reminds, life's course has run Its sadness reflecting from the eye's well, Streaming down in salted trails to their end Waiting for last breath without testament Remembering days, years we'll not extend Confronting our death, still we are content The sun cried today for the carnage seen Along the ridge where bodies lay, so still Covered in bloody mud fields, once pristine Gift given to this field, without ill will To die for country, alone far from home Trumpet blows, then silence after death's moan 1/13/14

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Date: 6/27/2017 10:27:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem, Frederic.
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Date: 6/25/2017 10:05:00 AM
This is really an amazing poem! Congrats on your well-deserved win.
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Date: 9/25/2016 7:16:00 PM
Oh Frederic...wow- so moving and powerful. "To die for country, alone far from home", I never thought if it that way. So sad, but this is beautifully written...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/24/2016 9:47:00 PM
Frederic, Congratulations on your well-deserved win. :):):) Stop by my latest blog "Last Laugh." if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/13/2014 5:54:00 PM
Beautiful
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Frederic Parker
Date: 1/13/2014 6:14:00 PM
thank you for your kind answer
Date: 1/13/2014 3:25:00 PM
- I feel sad in my heart - touching and beautiful poem Frederic. - Thank you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 1/13/2014 6:13:00 PM
thank you my poetic friend with the gentle heart
Date: 1/13/2014 12:05:00 PM
this poem really rattled me as it should. barbaraboyd
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Frederic Parker
Date: 1/13/2014 6:12:00 PM
thank you for your kind answer

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