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Tears

When I met you I fell in love You said you loved me And with a knife Like you carve names into trees You carved your name deep into my heart Then you hurt me My eyes filled with tears Or was it blood From my battered soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/23/2011 6:35:00 PM
nice lines
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Date: 11/23/2011 4:39:00 PM
Strong emotional write... Your soul can't be battered otherwise you wouldn't be able to write with such heart... my two cents.... Michael
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