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Tearless Shade

This storming howl embrace my step to hide I'm all alone blackened like a rose on my shade And i close all the blindless view of my eyes Cause it's riding me to a lonely path. This tearing rain walk through my soul with grace My life has just begun with no remorse But why goodbye is the only way that always taught me to love Where's the sand of solace for me?. I can't cut the dawn of my window for a new breed of pain Some good dreams will set for a deeper vain Always guiding the sorrow haunt at my anguished shadow Silently create my own to a nightmare's call.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/14/2008 11:04:00 AM
no offense but, my poem is just something i feel then i write it, nothing else, wasn't that called art of word too?, perhaps it's a poem right? wooahh that's my first criticism comment here ^.^ thanks anyway
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Date: 10/14/2008 9:38:00 AM
Cry me a river, build a bridge, and get over it. Your just babbling your problems, not creating a work of poetry.
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