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Teardrops From Bitter Clouds

5/21/11-5/22/11 They told me it was going to be sunny I decided to go to the beach Blue beauty… No, I’m not the same as you can see I soar off like a distant train swaying…staying Connected to the tracks overwhelmed by rain You weepie... don’t you know who made sorrow? Wait…do not scurry Tearless for tomorrow because that day will bring forth Brighter dusks…hidden beneath the surface Wherever we roam, I’ll collect the foam from the attacking waves Masked with bitterness led by the wind Bitter clouds sending rain I guess I’ll remain Home alone And watch a pale moonlight Shone in my withering curtains I’m certain There will be brighter days in this summer vacation that’s next in line where we will dine forever on a soaring tide clueless…undefined Overcome the clouds… Let out victory Let them know The key to life is positivity Or treasured love Beneath the surface In other words, You are marvelous…a blue beauty You are a dolphin against an unfriendly tide Sending teardrops from bitter clouds Never meant for harm… Keep me away from this charm You send from your silky… lushing…gushing… form brushing beside a shipwrecked terrain Paradise lies in silky clouds Sending irresistible rain Sending no doubts Or heart-breaking reminders Pouring out acid rain from bitter clouds Teary skies…how time flies… Sending drenched-up memories… Cuddling to the soul Oh, how time flies A cruel enemy…how time could be a loathly fiend Sending acid rain From tilted clouds immediately drains the hour…unaware of the time I wish I could fall in your arms While the bitter clouds alters into charms Remain positive and fit Don’t lie in the ocean floor There is a deep pit…be vigilant Stay awhile, will you? Tearless for tomorrow If you are made out of Droplets and charms My smile will warm up The cloudy day… and send the rain Under the water Under the teary sea is where our destiny will be the lovely clouds will be our shrouds it tickles my feet and your wiggling fins Stay awhile, will you? Tearless for tomorrow If you are made out of Droplets and charms Snuggle In my arms

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Date: 5/7/2014 12:58:00 AM
8th on the list: Dave, this one sticks out like a sore thumb (in a good way) amongst the series of poems you've given me. The way it was written, the flow, the execution especially the voice behind it are exceptional and sounds nothing like the other poems you made. This is written gold!
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Date: 11/4/2012 1:29:00 AM
This verse makes me cry. I really love the feel of it. (: Always, Laura
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Date: 1/3/2012 10:55:00 AM
Congrats on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best David. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/30/2011 8:28:00 AM
Wow! I was truly entertained by this poem, must confess. It's truly a delightful read... artistic in every possible way. Cheers and congratulations on making it to the finals with this masterful piece.
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Date: 12/12/2011 7:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week David. A well deserved feature. Love, Carol
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