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Tear Juice

.        Peeling off layers
               I'm slice'n, dice'n, chopp'n
                    Onion cries in pain

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  1. Date: 10/4/2009 10:04:00 AM
    Potent Senryu, Abe! Many layers deep! Love. Robin

  1. Date: 10/2/2009 3:50:00 PM
    I like what you did with the title, that is cute

  1. Date: 9/23/2009 2:45:00 PM
    Abe... I Love When Recipies Call for Onions, You must have a white onion in mind, cause they make me cry more than the red or yellow ones... (Hey, did the Onion say Ouch? smile) MoonBee

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 12:30:00 PM
    ONIONSONIONSONIONS yea oh man u make me hungry for them onions! love the detail hey onions and Shrek are alike....layers....~$avannah~

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 10:03:00 AM
    Mix a little sugar with it and it tastes great. No pain no gain lol. Loved this Abe, Thank you. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 9:06:00 AM
    laughing..for some reason makes me think of making chili.

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 7:28:00 AM
    Thanks for the challenge Abe ..:)there it goes my onion senryu--Charma,still smiling..

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 6:37:00 AM
    Hahaha,i love this onion game:)the crying onion must be smiling watching all these writes,an onion can become famous too:),sweet write Abe,nearly inspired me to write about an onion too:)Charma

  1. Date: 9/20/2009 8:56:00 PM
    HA! Genius! Great one! I'm going to post my interpretation on this subject, tonight. Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/20/2009 5:28:00 PM
    I like to see all the different work one subject. Nice work let's see what's next

  1. Date: 9/20/2009 4:50:00 PM
    Love it Abe !!! Thanks again for giving me new ideas to "paint with poetry!" My onion is peeling too!! :) Thanks for including me in your challenges.... the motivation really helps me!! PS. ... perhaps you will submit some art work of the Pecan tree sometime!! Have you captured it in paint??

  1. Date: 9/20/2009 4:17:00 PM
    Lightly humorous here. Keep writing. Sara