Tear

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^ as a tear appears not by force ** *** ?~ ? ^ but by freedom ** *** ? ~ ? ^ a gifted gift ** *** ? ~ ? 10/26/2016

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/31/2016 6:09:00 PM

Oh...what lovely is this. I loved how you used the shape of tears to get this message across. Yes...tears are appear out of freedom of expression of the heart. :) Hugs, dear.

Eve Roper
Date: 10/31/2016 6:17:00 PM

Hello beautiful the older I get everything seems to make me very teary eyed and not because of Menopause did that over that :) Hugs

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/27/2016 6:07:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it