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Tattered Old Mr Teddy Bear

In my bed, my childhood teddy layers next to me. Absent mindedly I trace his now tattered seams, And his matted brown fur from years of tears and hugs. Even though I'm old and gray, privately we talk. No, I'm not feeble-minded as some might think. I talk to Teddy of my thoughts I had that day. As long as I can speak, my Teddy is my guy. He's my greatest listener where so many are not. If he begins to talk, they'll surely take me away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/3/2013 1:36:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this awesome entry! Big congratulations on your win my dear Connie! love/hugs, Leonora
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/3/2013 2:37:00 PM
Thank you for your congrats and for stopping by Leonora. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 1/30/2013 11:52:00 AM
They hold secrets near and dear...do they not !! Enjoyed your poem !!
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/30/2013 3:09:00 PM
Thank you Debra for your comment and for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 1/29/2013 9:08:00 AM
Lucky Teddy Bear to be such a long and lasting comfort. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/29/2013 1:40:00 PM
Thanks for your congrats and for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 1/29/2013 7:13:00 AM
I like the added humor! Congrats
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/29/2013 1:41:00 PM
Thank you Richard for your comment and for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 1/29/2013 5:37:00 AM
congrats on a fine win Connie
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/29/2013 1:42:00 PM
Thanks Joseph for stopping by and for the congrats. Warm S,lies, Connie
Date: 1/28/2013 11:59:00 PM
Congrats Connie ...Seren
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/29/2013 1:47:00 PM
Thanks for the congrats Seren and for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/29/2013 4:01:00 AM
Thank your for your congrats Seren and for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 1/28/2013 10:57:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest Connie, hopefully the bear will keep his comments to hisself
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/29/2013 4:03:00 AM
Francine thank you for your congrats and stopping by. My teddy is too shy to make his opinions clear. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 1/28/2013 9:39:00 PM
Connie, Congratulations :-) on a cuddly interesting childhood thought and poem. Enjoyed your "Teddy Bear Picnic" winning poem in SandI's contest, ~Always* PD
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/29/2013 4:05:00 AM
Thank you for your congrats PD and for stopping by. I'm happy you enjoyed my tattered, and tear stain Mr. Teddy. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 1/28/2013 9:21:00 PM
thank you' SandyIvy
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/29/2013 4:07:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by. I enjoyed writing about Mr Teddy and sharing him with PS. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 1/7/2013 1:07:00 PM
ha ha they surely will love . I never had a teddy , ( i wipe a tear from my cheek) I don't know why not maybe my brothers beat them up or used them as cannon fodder lol xx
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/7/2013 5:00:00 PM
Thanks Mandy for your comment. Your never too old for a Teddy, lol. I needed to write at least one more poem before I go into surgery tomorrow, a 4th cervical surgery. My Ipad and PS will help me through my recoup time. I'm grateful for all the friends of made here. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 1/7/2013 7:16:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work..Great that you have your Teddy to talk to after this length of time..Sara
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/7/2013 7:31:00 AM
Thanks Sara for your comment. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 1/6/2013 6:08:00 PM
This is a fascinating write my friend, a fabulous way you spun your poem! I truly loved reading this delightful and terrific write this evening! What a wondrous piece, a wonderful companion you have with your teddy! Very enlightening poem, Great Work!!
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/7/2013 7:34:00 AM
Thanks Russell for your wonderful comment. We all need something from childhood, good memories or a tattered Teddy. Warm Smiles, Connie

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