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taste of silence

the day melts to orange...
gaunt pines climb the ridge
to jab invulnerable clouds

rock formations are
mauve and rust-red in twilight
deep jagged chasms

a meadow turns pink
as  evening nibbles at stars
a taste of silence

For Gail Doyle's Haiku challenge "A Scenery Of Your Choice As An Artist"

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  1. Date: 8/3/2012 8:04:00 PM
    No win for THESE? You were robbed, my dear!

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 7:06:00 PM
    those needles are sharp! Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 2:45:00 PM
    You painted such a lovely picture with your words, Carrie. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 12:41:00 PM
    Carrie,.......i am no critic of haikus....i dont understand them at all...........the poem is no doubt a good haiku, but I particularly like the language (evening nibbles at stars, taste of silence, jab invulnerable clouds) and its highly original and evocative personification deserves top place for the choice of language alone .....i send you my very best wishes for a high place in this contest.....Syd

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 10:08:00 AM
    Enjoyed your tasteful words Carrie, V

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 10:07:00 AM
    Wery good Carrie - Luck to you in contest! - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 9:28:00 AM
    Love it Carrie!Wonderful imagery!!