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Tarnished gate leans firm…surviving my youth’s wildly-drawn graffiti. For Rick Parise: One, One Liner Contest 11/10/2016

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Rizwana Bhurani

Date: 11/12/2016 7:41:00 PM

Congratulations......wonderfully portrayed.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/11/2016 1:25:00 PM

Came back to reread this entry, Nette; could not believe it was not on the list!! I still like it:) hugs // paul

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 11/10/2016 1:57:00 AM

Excellent. Brings lots of sweet memories back. Very creative. Thanks for sharing it.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/9/2016 4:54:00 PM

I wonder what your graffiti look like, Nette! Mine used to mostly show windmills, flowers and birds. Enjoyed this one-liner; I like being taken back in time:) hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2016 3:54:00 PM

That is REALLY a good one, Nette!! Great thinking

Jan Allison

Date: 11/9/2016 3:33:00 PM

great take on the theme Nette I bet your graffiti was poetic and rhyming lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Leon Datu

Date: 11/9/2016 2:30:00 PM

Our gate has my doodles imprinted on it; a hallmark of those young days! Incredibly creative that raises the poetic bar!

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 11/9/2016 1:21:00 PM

I also have written grafitty: About you, dear Nefertitti...

Christy Stover

Date: 11/9/2016 1:06:00 PM

Depth in beauty in one line.

Chris Green

Date: 11/9/2016 1:04:00 PM

That was cute Nette and I could picture this scene you have wonderfully created with your on line. It made me smile.