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Tapestry of Dreams

Blue days gone quickly from my window reminisce each thread still holding one last moment to re-live as the orange sun sinks quickly light green fades in dusk two September roses bow starlight falls above and in that final inkling poetic words flow from rust as I gaze quickly for each moment I must catch a song plays grandeur as my spirit comes to rest silent, loving, I fall fast

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/21/2011 1:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of Francine "The View" ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/19/2011 11:14:00 AM
Just wonderful Rick.....understated, and beautiful!!
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Date: 9/19/2011 3:34:00 AM
Rick congrats on your great win..David
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Date: 9/19/2011 2:55:00 AM
brilliant Rick, this is quality personified, congrats on your number one. harry
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Date: 9/18/2011 10:57:00 PM
CONGRATS RICK ON FIRST PLACE WIN WITH THIS LOVELY TANKA .MY FRIEND LUV..
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Date: 9/18/2011 10:46:00 PM
congrats on your winning work Rick, a well deserved 1st place
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Date: 9/7/2011 8:42:00 AM
Wishing you the best in the contest ^Rick. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/6/2011 3:51:00 PM
SHEER BEAUTY RICK.. DESIGNED TO DELIGHT THE READER WITH VIVID IMAGES AND LOVELY SCENES ..WHERE HAVE U BEEN LUV? SO MISSING MY FRIEND NOW...GOOD LUCK..
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Date: 9/6/2011 2:20:00 PM
Very descriptive work.Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Good luck in the contest..Sara
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