Tao Te Ski

The state of flow, eternal Tao Dance in the ephemeral now A Bound mind will not allow A Joyous downward plow Soft snow, honored thou Its own meaning endow Feet atop sacred bough Snow cut by skis’ prow Let me show you how 4/5/16

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2016 3:50:00 PM

Very COOL monorhyme poem, Tom!!

Tom Quigley
Date: 4/5/2016 8:45:00 PM

Ideally, otherwise it gets slushy! ;-) Thanks!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/5/2016 11:00:00 AM

i like the meditative feel of this one, tom... well done!..huggs

Tom Quigley
Date: 4/5/2016 8:44:00 PM

Oops! Comment jumped--Thanks! Moving meditation is my favorite kind. :-)

Tom Quigley
Date: 4/5/2016 8:43:00 PM

Thanks! So many ways one can approach the subject of water...under, over, frozen, snow, running...

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/5/2016 8:32:00 AM

Never learned to snow ski. Too old now!. Nice poem. Peace my friend:)

Tom Quigley
Date: 4/5/2016 9:26:00 AM

Thanks! Have a good one. :-)