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Tantric

a silent play of glances heaves along red moonlit air, two palms ignite a charmed lure flaming lotus eyes... the touch of his evening skin, lingers on my fluid mouth exploring tantric kisses… without need for words -------------- Dr. Ram Mehta's Dodoitsu Contest by nette onclaud 2/13/2015

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Date: 4/22/2017 11:49:00 AM
Really beautiful and sensuous nette, great use of the form.
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Date: 2/16/2015 3:31:00 PM
Such wonderful use of language in these Dodoitsu, it is one of my favourite forms so much can be expressed in so few words. Your imagry is brilliant, a great write. Good luck in the comp. I think it is a winner. love Shane xxx
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Date: 2/15/2015 2:29:00 AM
Lovely nette..not sure but I think he wanted 2 verses for the contest. wouldnt want you to miss out if thats the case. BG
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Date: 2/14/2015 1:33:00 PM
Breathtaking scene of romance which is heightened by hints of sensuality. Well worded and a distinct kind of poetry, Nette. The last line sweetens the whole mood of this fine poem.
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Date: 2/14/2015 1:09:00 PM
Your word choice is good and the message sent is strong, sensual and provocative. Emile. #7
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Date: 2/14/2015 11:26:00 AM
this is REALLY GOOD. A chart topper and sensuous beauty, Nette.
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Date: 2/14/2015 11:24:00 AM
- Beautiful with a few words - Good luck in the contest - Sweet Valentines day, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/14/2015 10:59:00 AM
tantric kisses.. great expression Nette.. like like... wish you a happy valentines day and a great weekend... hugs,nad!
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Date: 2/14/2015 9:08:00 AM
Oh how lovely...this is one lovely story captured in just a few words...Super 7 and a fav! Sweet Valentine's this rainy night, Nette. :D Kim
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Date: 2/14/2015 7:43:00 AM
Tantric Kisses wow great experience..sensual...blissful..Love nette. Wish you a Happy Valentine's Day. Always & Forever...rajat
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Date: 2/14/2015 6:19:00 AM
Oh beautiful Nette good luck with this little gem:-) Hugs jan xx
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