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tanka lite

The Military 

A soldier lost his rifle 
A general lost a war 
Soldier shot
Cowardice they said 
The General was promoted 
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  1. Date: 12/7/2012 2:24:00 PM
    That's the way the ones that give the wars run the wars... Good poem... Terry

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 7:59:00 AM
    you say it so well in six lines.

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    Date: 12/1/2012 1:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you kathy