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Dandelion Wishes

dandelion fuzz released into the air by a wish -- childhood dreams scatter to places unknown 3/24/15

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/2/2015 2:49:00 PM

Congrats..Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 3/29/2015 10:05:00 AM

Beautiful poem, brings back memories of the things we did when we were children. A 7 and congratulations on your win. Blessings Eve

Mohan Chutani

Date: 3/28/2015 11:34:00 PM

Kim, this is a beautiful magical wish Tanka. Congrats. Mohan

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/28/2015 7:11:00 PM

So nice to enjoy your verse this cold snowy evening. Light & Love

John Lawless

Date: 3/28/2015 1:35:00 PM

Way to go Kim. Congrats on the top...

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/28/2015 12:58:00 PM

Wow, Kim, this is magnificent! Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win! Hugs, Sandra

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/28/2015 12:27:00 PM

Lovely tanka. Congratulations, Kim! :)

Abdul Malik

Date: 3/28/2015 11:38:00 AM

Very nice. Congrats.

Joseph May

Date: 3/28/2015 11:12:00 AM

Congrats on a great win Kim

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/28/2015 10:07:00 AM

Oh, I do so love this !! Wonderful tanka, and softly sentimental !! Congratulations to you, Kim !

Constance La France

Date: 3/28/2015 7:19:00 AM

Kim, your tanka is beautiful and dreamy, congratulations on your first place win in the contest, a perfect 7 rating . . .

Jan Allison

Date: 3/28/2015 5:41:00 AM

I knew this would fly Kim - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2015 12:25:00 AM

Wow, Kim. BLOW me away. guess what? I have done a very similar poem myself but in etheree form. so of course I love this one!!! Congrats on number one. the ending of yours is PERFECTO!!

The Situation

Date: 3/24/2015 6:07:00 PM

Ever blow one in someones mouth?

David Mohn

Date: 3/24/2015 5:42:00 PM

This is very good Kim...sure to do well

Kim Shaw

Date: 3/24/2015 4:00:00 PM

Such beautiful imagery, Kim. This is a favorite. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Kimberly

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 3/24/2015 1:02:00 PM

Very nice. i always love how so few words can take you off in memory. Good luck in the contest!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/24/2015 11:41:00 AM

oh simply wonderful Kim - I love dandelion clocks - a fabulous tanka good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx