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Tanka 1

I call out your name. But, you never answer me. You are always there. I try to reach out to you. You’re a shadow in my mind. © Holly P. Moore October 2012

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Date: 10/25/2012 4:31:00 AM
Good emotional tanka.Lovely read.
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Date: 10/20/2012 6:45:00 AM
Holly now you are cooking on gas, as we say here, your wings are spreading very nicely indeed, good luck and keep going...David
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Date: 10/20/2012 4:58:00 AM
He knows your love and he watches over you..he sent you white feathers didn't he? Another touching poem from the heart.
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