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Tangled Vines

Tangled vines kept closed the door that led into the secret garden the small girl very patiently one by one untangled them It took her oh so very long until at last they were all free slowly, and so excitedly she opened the door and peered Her eyes wide as saucers as she beheld the beauty a stunning garden decked with flowers made of jewels contest: Tangled Vines written 06/30/2013

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Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/31/2013 1:30:00 PM

This made me smile. congrats to you and your garden. BG

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/1/2013 5:12:00 PM

hi Barbara thats good lol ty for reading and congrats

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 7/31/2013 3:58:00 AM

Beautiful and lovely write,Shadow..Congrats on your superb win in this contest...XOXO...

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/1/2013 5:13:00 PM

hi Olusequn Ty glad you enjoyed it Shadow x smiles

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/30/2013 2:36:00 PM

Ahhh!! Congrats on your winning work..Great story told in poetic form..Sara

Skat A

Date: 6/30/2013 7:42:00 PM

a good free verse . Thank you for sharing <3 ~SKAT~ <3

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 6/29/2013 6:51:00 PM

'The Secret Garden' is one of my very favorite movies....love this. Suz

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/29/2013 6:57:00 PM

hi SuZ the book is fantastic +) ty for your time reading Shadow x smiles

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 6/29/2013 6:13:00 PM

Shadow I hope you don't mind but the first line of the second verse, and last line of third verse needs correcting. Otherwise it sounds Fine. Warm Smiles, Connie

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/29/2013 6:56:00 PM

hi Connie no I don't mind in the least. See what you think now ty Shadow x smiles