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Tangible Thought

The typical intro, A moment of reflection, Philosophical conversation with my glass veil is ago, I swear she's the perfect audience lacking in cognition but excellent in reception, Shameless in anonymity and thoroughly content being one-dimensional, An afterthought emerged from reverberating echoes, Rationalizing a fantasy through demented reality and an appeal to logos, External concern expressed through intellectual opinion against a majesty outside the realm of scientific convention, A slight ringing in my ear, The hazing of the eyes, My hand presses against the screen and a genie appears, her technicolor smoke-screen muffles sound and blankets sight, Far beyond my mortal boundaries I reach, Into the land of impossibilities ignorantly called "make believe", Calling upon my polygonal masters from this pulpit I beseech, That your realm of tangible thought be opened to me, Allow me to apply my humble craft in hopes of conveying your magnificence to the world, So that they too will experience your wonder, Before they grow too old.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/9/2015 1:34:00 PM
Michael, a big congratulations on having your wonderful poem selected as a Feature Poem For The Week, enjoy the honor, and welcome to poetry soup ~~
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Date: 10/9/2015 7:41:00 AM
Greetings Michael. Welcome to Poetry Soup - a great avenue for spilling out overflowing musings from the soul, and developing writing skills, and learning new poetry styles like me, lol. Congratulations for having your piece featured in Poetry Soup home page! ;-)
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Michael Zavaletta
Date: 10/9/2015 11:21:00 AM
Thanks for the greeting man! I'm a DeviantArter at heart but I'm liking this website so far, very professional. :) I'll be uploading a lot more of my stuff in the future so hopefully I can keep getting my word out, thanks for the support. :)
Date: 10/2/2015 12:42:00 AM
Hi Michael, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Michael Zavaletta
Date: 10/4/2015 3:59:00 PM
Man you admins sure are friendly. Thanks for the welcome, glad to be here. :)
Date: 9/30/2015 7:47:00 PM
Michael, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Michael Zavaletta
Date: 9/30/2015 8:01:00 PM
Thanks for rollin out the red carpet! I'm more used to DeviantArt but I'll try to work around my ignorance of what poetry style my stuff follows and all that jazz. Follow away Linda I'll be here. :)

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