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Talking In Your Sleep

Talking in Your Sleep It makes me laugh the times I chance to hear you talking in your sleep! Sometimes you seem just like a child, so innocent and dear, and I can tell you’re in a silly dream! The voice I hear sounds like a child of two who needs his mommy’s reassuring hug. as if you’re lost and don’t know what to do. I feel my heart strings give a little tug. Sometimes you seem to panic in your sleep. You nearly scream, or frightful sounds you make. And I can tell you’ve fallen very deep into your dream’s abyss. You need to wake! I shake you lightly, watching for your eyes to open. “It was just a dream,” I say. Then back you go where time so quickly flies and hopefully, the bad has flown away. Jan. 18, 2017

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Date: 4/17/2018 12:26:00 AM
So sweet, Andrea. I love the tone. A delightful read.
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Date: 1/26/2017 8:23:00 AM
Oh and all i get is an elbow, the poetry is lovely as is the sentiment..
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Date: 1/24/2017 9:06:00 PM
What a wonderful psycho analysis you have beautifully made in this superb write dear friend. Congrats on your grand win. love and best wishes...Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 1/22/2017 7:41:00 PM
Congrats on your win on this piece I can so identify with as I sometimes have night terrors. 7 ; )
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Date: 1/21/2017 10:58:00 PM
I glad I don't talk in my sleep. Great poem and congrats on your well deserved win Andrea! :-)
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Date: 1/20/2017 7:45:00 PM
I enjoyed this bit of whimsy. Thanks for sharing the personal thoughts. Neither my special one nor I seem to talk in our sleep, and all I can say is thank heaven.
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Date: 1/20/2017 2:08:00 PM
Very nice write, Andrea, congratulations on your win. Hugs
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Date: 1/20/2017 9:23:00 AM
Congrats on a great win Andrea
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Date: 1/20/2017 7:54:00 AM
Congrats Andrea :)
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Date: 1/19/2017 9:38:00 PM
Lovely, Andrea! Congrats! xo
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Date: 1/19/2017 9:37:00 PM
That's so beautiful Andrea - congrats on your win :)
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Date: 1/19/2017 8:55:00 PM
I love the sweetness with your write here Andrea, and the last four words are so beautiful , congratulations
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Date: 1/19/2017 12:27:00 PM
oh this is a really cute rhyme Andrea good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/19/2017 12:25:00 PM
I think it's funny when my dog talks in his sleep, starts growling ! Doggy dreams . Great poem Andrea
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Date: 1/19/2017 2:03:00 AM
Very good dream poem Andrea well done I didn't bother x
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Date: 1/19/2017 1:30:00 AM
It's so beautiful Andrea. My wife says that I talk in my sleep and I think would would love to read this too. Thanks for sharing this beautiful creation
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Date: 1/18/2017 10:33:00 PM
Dreams are funny things and as you say can be frightening. Did you ever write down what you dreamed? Let me know what you think of Demon, Demon after you have listened to it Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/18/2017 7:15:00 PM
Not sure I would want to talk in my sleep, my wife hasn't mentioned it if I have..hmmm maybe I should ask
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