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Taken, never Forsaken

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Taken, never Forsaken

When I try to look back, it hurts to start A mother I was now in continual broken heart In the innocence of that Sunday quietly shopping away When my thoughts to humanity go in angered astray One minute he held my hand, the next he was gone In suspended silence I float amidst stared public throng Questions through confusion as to where I stood last Still feeling his hand, that loving maternal grasp Lights became brighter, louder were the voices Still confusion abounds in sporadic lost choices Who could have taken him, where has he gone So many voices not singing the same song Continually I dream about these words you've just read To the end of my days I can't think of him dead <*>

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  1. Date: 4/8/2013 8:49:00 PM
    a very sad poem. How happy turned sorrow as fast as blink of an eye. well penned and really deep. thanks for visiting my page, James. I thought what you wrote for Coleen is really nice and uplifting, it seemed like you've been real friends for so long. :)

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 11:24:00 PM
    This is so sad, a small child was lost here last weekend. This describes the pain perfectly. Message me on your thoughts on how to perfect my writings. Trying to get back into it after years of not writing. Thanks for your comments.

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 3:14:00 PM
    very good write, but sad, congrats on your win, well deserved, you have a blessed Easter Sunday ;}

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 7:07:00 PM
    Hello James,, congratulations with your amazing win.. xox~PD

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 4:01:00 PM
    James, sad recurring feelings to have and expose through your poems. like you said never forsaken... xoolio ~PD

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 4:49:00 PM
    James you told this sad tale with a realistic emotion. It's great to see you on a winners list. congratulations.

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 2:40:00 PM
    Always glad to see your name in lights well worth a second read. Conrad's on your winning writes. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 7:46:00 PM
    Such a horrific tragedy when a child is taken. You portrayed the setting of such an event very well. Congrats on your win, James! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 3:25:00 PM

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 12:28:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 11:14:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning spot with this sacra one James xx

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 12:23:00 AM
    Very moving. a mother's worst nightmare

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 1:14:00 PM
    of course James, a loss with much sorrow we should not hope to endure, ~PD

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 5:13:00 AM
    Interesting voice that you have used in this one..That kind of happening has got to be terrible for a mother and a father..Very emotive and descriptive work..Sara

    Fraser Avatar James Fraser
    Date: 1/12/2013 5:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Sara :)
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 5:26:00 PM
    A powerful write would be a mother's worse nightmare, losing a son, thank you for sharing James xxx

    Fraser Avatar James Fraser
    Date: 1/12/2013 3:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Many thanks for your kind words :)
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 4:57:00 PM
    Sad and disturbing....but you have put it delicately and honestly... To purge it out in writing,anything and everything,I feel relieved. Perhaps you do too.....take care.... Love,Mehnaz

    Fraser Avatar James Fraser
    Date: 1/12/2013 3:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Mehnaz :)
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 4:52:00 PM
    The universal plight of all mothers who lose their child too soon! Good one Jamie Light & Love

    Fraser Avatar James Fraser
    Date: 1/12/2013 3:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you kindly 'Head Mistress' :) xx
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 4:09:00 PM
    I'll not share a similiar story for it's something I don't do, but only say I feel this deeply in my being and read with understanding. You have treated this tenderly, honestly and with love and for that I applaud this write !! Bless you !!

    Fraser Avatar James Fraser
    Date: 1/11/2013 4:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Debra, as with all poems of such, I'll always treat them with tenderness and understanding. Feel free to share your story, as I'll reciprocate with my own story. Have a lovely weekend :)