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Take Your Bow

Run, run, run Is all I hear Speak to me. Whisper in my ear. Looking over my shoulder Nothing there to see Hit the door But I have no key. Locked out or locked in. Either way no way to escape All my demons Takeing all these shapes. Consider it yours Consider me done Take your prize, Now youv'e won Settle the sea Calm the crooks Raise the house They shall read this in every book

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/21/2012 7:05:00 AM
Take your bow,Stacey,nice
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Stacey Brackley
Date: 5/21/2012 7:27:00 AM
Thank you vert much... Stacey
Date: 5/21/2012 6:05:00 AM
Very carefully thought out... I would call it a QUATRAIN, (4-line verses.) Well rhymed, with a pleasing cadence. BRAVO, Stacey! Best wishes, Keith
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Stacey Brackley
Date: 5/21/2012 6:13:00 AM
I really don'y know any peorty terminolgy- they don't tend to teach you that side of of it in schools, so thank you. Stacey
Date: 5/21/2012 5:08:00 AM
Sad indeed, sense the futility
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Stacey Brackley
Date: 5/21/2012 6:12:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read it... Stacey

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