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Take My Life

Take my life Jesus said and a new beginning you will stared . no-one understood but Jesus did, and the price that he must pay to have it. Take my life he said on that cross on the hill. I will forgive you all give all a saving grace forever. Take my life that’s the way it must be to save you all. He hung on that cross his love shined down, as the pain raged inside his body he ask God to forgive us all. His blood was so pure that God had to take it to cover all our sin’s. Giving us all away to see heaven above, with love and peace forever with joy ,love forevermore. Take my life

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Date: 8/28/2008 3:33:00 AM
Angelia, This write is a reminder of the greatest gift given to us all "For God so loved the world that He gave his only begotton Son(Christ Jesus)that whosoever believed in him would not perish but have everlasting life"... Indeed we are redeemed by the blood of (The Risen Lamb) Christ Jesus who is without blemish and without spot(sin)covers the sins of the world with forgiveness and life everlasting. This is a writ of love, I thank you for sharing. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 8/27/2008 3:36:00 PM
a very good poem and touching, they took Jesus's life, but he gave it freely. a great message in this piece. thank you for reading my Sunshine Over The Mountain and for your comment
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Date: 8/27/2008 2:58:00 PM
All for us, yes He loves us all...Excellent write, Always, Christy
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