Tabby

TABBY only on her terms you can sense it in her eyes’ remote, half-wild flash for when you stroke her she jumps a sweet woods musing disturbed

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/3/2013 10:44:00 AM

meow meow... Is this that cat named Tiger.. just wondering.. or do you just love cats, My sweet friend Daver... another great tanka, Linda

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 8/10/2013 2:29:00 PM

Love this write, Daver! A wonderful rendering of this Tabby, I'm especially enjoying the last line, "sweet woods musing disturbed". :) That's certainly an accurate interpretation to it's reaction to being stroked. Love, Mikki

Donna Jones

Date: 8/8/2013 5:40:00 PM

For sure! They own us I think.....enjoyed...

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/8/2013 10:54:00 AM

Cats are simply their own people LOL, I love cats! Light & Love

Jack Horne

Date: 8/7/2013 4:33:00 PM

awww, I can picture this one so well, Daver

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/6/2013 10:48:00 AM

They definitely want what they want on their terms..Enjoyed reading your Tabby story..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2013 2:57:00 PM

ahhh, this is so sweet. I am always up for a good cat read!!