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Sycamore Memories-Win

"To hold as 'twere, the mirror up to nature. " William Shakespeare," Hamlet 1601." Window covered by a sycamore tree Constant friend of my snowy Maple days Memories spring as insects on a tree Turn my gloomy days in glorious days Hippocrates got his inspiration For research in medicine to begin Buddh sat under it for meditation The enlightenment of mind to attain. Desdemona sat sighing under it In agony to hear willow song treat Flying to Egypt Mary stopped a bit Crann ban “Money tree” in Irish spirit To demystify health, to personalize To me sycamore is to poetize. ** The notion of a "mirror held up to nature" has been taken over for any mimetic theory of art — the idea that art should represent reality and nature as closely as possible** +++++++ Revised and Reposted May 4, 2014 Form : Shakespearean sonnet in Pentameter Dr.Ram Mehta Contest: Shakespeare by Frank H. ========================= Dr. Ram Mehta Date: 4/19/2011 Fourth Place win in : Contest:The Tree sponsored by Constance La france-A rambling poet ========================= * I wrote a sonnet Maple Memories in 2000 while living in Windsor-ONT and was posted on 6/29/2005 on PS as Maple Memories. The present poem is re-written for the contest. ** Maple Days- Maple is the national tree of Canada. * Buddha is pronounced one syllable

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Date: 4/26/2011 6:11:00 AM
Congratulations Dr. Ram on your win in Constance's "The Tree" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/25/2011 7:34:00 AM
This poem is so different from the other poems of this contest Dr.Mehta.Wonderful.Congrats on your win--kashinath
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Date: 4/25/2011 4:58:00 AM
This is beautufl and informative as well. many many congrats.
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Date: 4/24/2011 2:33:00 PM
Dr. Ram, I am glad to see this one again as I review the winners' list.Congratulations to you on this look at the beautiful sycamore tree.
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Date: 4/24/2011 7:51:00 AM
Many congrats and a happy Easter to you : )
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Date: 4/24/2011 6:23:00 AM
cheesr for the high win , dr. ram... splendid write...:) huggs
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Date: 4/23/2011 8:58:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your 4th place win in the tree contest with this lovely piece on the sycamore..my friend.. a great win to celebrate Easter Sunday luv..
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Date: 4/23/2011 6:53:00 PM
Great to see you in the winner's circle, Dr Ram. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor in place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/23/2011 5:46:00 PM
Lovely to see that you also wrote of the Sycamore tree. One of my favorites!! Congratulations on your wonderful win!
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Date: 4/23/2011 5:41:00 PM
I love the way you teach through your poetry, Dr. Ram. This is outstanding! Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/23/2011 5:20:00 PM
I commented on this early Dr. Ram and am so happy to see this topping the winner's circle. Lainie
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Date: 4/21/2011 11:54:00 AM
Beautiful, Dr. Ram. Sure to place high on score board. I live in Ontario most of the year - not to far from Windsor. The maple tree is a wonderous tree for so many reasons. I am now in North Carolina where I reside part of the year and I love the sycamore as well. Best wishes to you. Lainie
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Date: 4/20/2011 12:26:00 AM
buddha is really one syllable?? they just say "bud?"
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Date: 4/20/2011 12:25:00 AM
You really like those maple trees, Dr.Ram. You are a proud Canadian!!
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Date: 4/20/2011 12:14:00 AM
And poetize it you have done well. Keep the great writing going! Smiles. Dane Ann
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Date: 4/19/2011 8:14:00 PM
The sycamore tree is a truely wonderful one. Great write
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Date: 4/19/2011 5:25:00 PM
Perfectly elegant Dr. Ram.. a wondrous write on this lovely tree ..good luck in the contest.. luv.. I redid my TABOO entry just a bit to include the DUSK theme presented by dear Nette if u want to take a second look now.. appreciate luv..
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Date: 4/19/2011 4:39:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest, Wonderful, soup mail in a moment~~
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Date: 4/19/2011 2:35:00 PM
just love the Sycamore tree, this was a very refreshing piece.
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Date: 4/19/2011 2:14:00 PM
Wasn't sure how to write this poem but you did a magnificent job with it good luck!
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Date: 4/19/2011 2:12:00 PM
Dr.Ram, I love to write. But i have never written different styles which is why I like this site so much. It challenges me to use different words, themes and styles Since I started using this site I have written my first couplet and tanka.. Look forward to sharing more with you.. cory
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Date: 4/19/2011 1:47:00 PM
Yes. There is something extra-alive about a tree. I have always held them in majesty. Without them our planet would die. Many of my most vivid memories are concerned with trees. Valuable message, Doc. Love, daver
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Date: 4/19/2011 9:02:00 AM
The Sycamore tree is one of the oldest species of trees on this earth. Thank you Dr Ram, I learned a lot today. Judy
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