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Swirlism

Swirly and curly, Wiggles and spots, irrational, irritable thoughts, Raw feelings, Limbo, idealistic thought patterns, Sense of muddle, Memory full.

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Jack Ellison

Date: 8/12/2012 5:03:00 PM

Wow! You just described my muddled brain! LOL Wake up in the morning and wonder what strange stories it has in store for me! Do you think I need help??? LOL Love and hugs, Jack xxxxxxxx

Amanda Sullivan
Date: 9/10/2012 7:18:00 AM

Awww like wise Jack xx we prob need help the both of us, never mind we are good, life is good muddled brain and all love and best wishes Amanda xx

Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/12/2012 6:56:00 AM

i feel a headache building in your words.

Amanda Sullivan
Date: 8/12/2012 11:22:00 AM

Oh dear sorry Joann ;( I can see how though.Muddled head=headache!!!!!! I have a muddled head at the best of times, am I am sure most ppl do at some point in there lives unless they are extremely lucky. Hope you liked it though thanks Amanda xx :)

David Williams

Date: 8/12/2012 5:37:00 AM

Amanda this sounds like inside my head...David

Amanda Sullivan
Date: 8/12/2012 11:23:00 AM

Me too David, that's why it came to me reasonably easily!!! Hope your head gets unmuddled xxxxxx Amanda :))