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Swift Wind

The nice swift wind,blows across my face hitting me cold,in the life's bitter race. The streets are lonely and lone I'm walking, in the cold hostile air,hardly I'm smiling. Searching for the one who held my hands to make me feel warm like the magic wands Still moving alone in the path of life feeling the pain through the edge of knife Still wishing to go back in time to childhood playing on streets like those in the neighborhood far better than moving alone searching for the one who comforts me just like the morning sun The nice swift wind ,seems romantic no longer neither the cool breeze feels like the earlier.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/31/2010 4:26:00 AM
Thank you all and wish you a prosperous and happy new year
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Date: 12/30/2010 6:09:00 PM
Biplab..,, enjoyed your poem. Stopping by to wish you lots of cheers & joy this comming new year.. May you always find new ways to share your talent and imagination with us here at the soup. Happy new year to you and your family,, God bless,.miss.p.d.
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Date: 12/30/2010 5:16:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Biplab. I will be back after the New Year to read more of your poetry. Wishing you a very Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/30/2010 4:39:00 AM
Fantastic picture of the silence and isolation you have worded well in this write. I hope it is for the contest on the theme of silence, Biplab
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