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Sweetness

Every time I think of you my eyes they bleed tears, Shadows in my memories, remind me of all your fears. Consuming me and killing you, our childrens cry,there sorrow true . I feel the pressure, crushing me down I hear the drums from up under the ground The sickness the sadness I'd die to be free. my barrowed time is running out on me. James ...................

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/27/2010 9:34:00 AM
A pleasure to read your creative poetry today James. I am hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2010 8:56:00 AM
DEEP AND WONDERFUL WRITE TO READ! HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT
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Date: 9/27/2010 8:49:00 AM
Nice expression " bleed tears" and my barrowed time running out on me,,very sentimental and sad, james
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