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Sweetly Sings

Medicine of this soul faraway with a dream seventh Heaven looking across a sea the other night went for a walk strolling against a cold wind distant thoughts Crying seagulls on the beach looking around even snow lying in the sand it was quite an awakening cold cutting ice wind blowing across the brow Listening to the echoing roars crunching of great cliffs tasting salted air waves crashing thunder I thought of you as the surf sprayed on shores Oh the moon as the winds howl laying golden whispers your name landing wishes fall on a star sparkling beams Heaven you came to me under a crystal blue white light An angel fallen who found one miracle lost in this world drunken in the chalice of love each drop dripping passion adoring loves beauty forever and always

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/19/2015 6:06:00 PM
Good stuff old friend!
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Date: 1/18/2015 4:38:00 PM
It is a wonderful feeling when our wishes come true, and those last few lines of yours were filled with pure enchantment... A lovely poem, my dear friend!
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Date: 1/18/2015 5:25:00 AM
- A touching and beautiful poem, dear Liam - People seeking in stars, sea and earth .... and finds comfort and golden words :) - 7 + !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/18/2015 2:58:00 AM
so tender and loving Liam old pal superb hugs 7
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Date: 1/17/2015 11:37:00 PM
Hello Liam Mate!! This is a beautiful pen indeed. Methinks Sir, you have the "Leprechaun Choir" both singing and crying on this one. Best Always, Gary
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Date: 1/17/2015 10:51:00 PM
This sweet poem flows like honey, great write liam !
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Date: 1/17/2015 9:53:00 PM
Nively done. Love the taste and feeling of this poem... Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/17/2015 8:33:00 PM
Awe lovely! You are eloquent with your words!
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Date: 1/17/2015 6:03:00 PM
Liam, what a beautiful poem of enchantment. Romance intertwined brilliantly through your lines. Ahhhh, what bliss is this! #7 Fav'ing this one. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 1/17/2015 5:49:00 PM
Hi Liam ! Another very beautiful and very romantic poem penned by you my dearest friend Liam. Very dazzling! So dreamy sweet and tender to be held so very close to ones heart. smiling. Last couplet by far the best. Just awesome! A very solid 7 +++ ++ from me! Very beautiful golden pen Liam! you're always the best!.smiling.Have a very wonderful weekend! God bless you and be with you always! You take care of yourself now! :) Love and hugs! xxoxoxo D.^O^" "
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Date: 1/17/2015 4:04:00 PM
Just wow... like your poems... they r so vivid... nad!!
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Date: 1/17/2015 3:56:00 PM
Your imagery is divine Liam :-) A 7 from me:-)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/20/2015 3:36:00 PM
jan thank you dear pal for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated

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