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Sweet Pain

Walking with your soul and body, Your arms against The wind, your eyes close, your mouth opens Letting the sound of your soul takes over The ocean in blue. Crashing your flesh against the ironed ship, I feel it like a stormy anchor deep The lotus swamp of this so-called love in despair! Who is the man with whom you Have seen beyond the sea where your desires melting? Who is the man where the rights Are just the virginal shore I taken and enjoy? The devil's reply with charming and roaring eyes! Oh, love!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/12/2013 9:10:00 PM
Beautifully written. Very different way of expressing the feeling.. i love it. hello there you nice to meet you .
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George Zamalea
Date: 1/13/2013 7:47:00 PM
Kimmy, How much I appreciated your comments and help me to move on? A lot! And my feedback on your poem it has been on your remarkable expression! Thanks!

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