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Sweet Love Song

love is fresh and new but grows strong like an oak tree sweet shade in the sun foundation of trust hearts and souls given freely thoughts that live as one kisses like nectar skin to skin and arm in arm song sung endlessly

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Date: 2/24/2011 10:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Deb. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/18/2011 7:56:00 AM
fabulous words, congrats. Déirdre
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Date: 2/18/2011 4:47:00 AM
I love your poem and I love sharing 2nd place with you!! congrats my dear...love Michael
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Date: 2/17/2011 11:56:00 PM
Many Congrats Deb for big win in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 2/17/2011 11:30:00 PM
Beautiful Senryu, dear Deb. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 2/17/2011 4:22:00 PM
that's really cool Deb. I like it lots. Congratulations well deserved win
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Date: 2/17/2011 1:54:00 PM
This was yet another lovely one, and I enjoyed reading it, Deb. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/17/2011 10:35:00 AM
Wonderful sweet love song,Deb!Congrats on your win-----kashinath
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Date: 2/17/2011 10:05:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful Deb, congratulations on your awesome win in Linda's contest, love Wilma
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Date: 2/17/2011 9:30:00 AM
Hello Deb, Well done, this is beautiful and it goes into my favorites. I love this Congratulations on your win Lov, Shar
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Date: 2/17/2011 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your fantastic 2nd place win in the contest, Deb. Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/16/2011 8:47:00 PM
sweetness it is, deb!! CHEERS for the great win..:) hugs, nette
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Date: 2/16/2011 7:47:00 PM
A beautiful Song. Many congrats for this huge win.
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Date: 2/16/2011 6:55:00 PM
Deb, Good to see you at the top. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/16/2011 6:25:00 PM
These are three superb senryu entries, Deb. Congratulations on winning in Linda's contest.
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Date: 2/16/2011 5:45:00 PM
Congratulations on the second place winin the contest of Linda, Deb
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Date: 2/16/2011 5:24:00 PM
Congrats Deb on your success in my contest luv.. thankxx for your support always...
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Date: 2/6/2011 12:31:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this very passionate work..Reads like winners' circle to me..Sara
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Date: 2/2/2011 6:13:00 PM
Nice multiple senryu with nice theme, deb
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Date: 2/2/2011 5:51:00 AM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Deb... good luck.. will read fully as judging time draws closer luv.
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