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Sweet Ice Queen

Sweet Ice Queen ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Walking with my honey in the rain Makes me feel alive and young again Feeling like I'm seventeen once more This girls a gentle creature I do adore We met one day when she was feeding ducks at the lake She was so pretty couldn’t help myself I did a double take When I approached her with a smile she told me take a hike The hot and feisty ones are the type I really like Everywhere it seemed we kept on meeting by chance After weeks of pleading I got her number, then asked her for a dance With the music nice and slow, a lovely woman in my arms I had finally broken through her shell of ice And she surrendered to my charms.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/23/2010 10:05:00 AM
so sweet
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Date: 2/20/2010 7:47:00 PM
love it! keep up the excellent work! ------Ell
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Date: 2/20/2010 6:50:00 AM
A sweet poem .. I see u melted your ice queen after all.. a great read to start Saturday.. enjoyed Edward.. thankxxx for sharing and for your comments on my poetry.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/20/2010 6:03:00 AM
romantic story, very nice
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Date: 2/19/2010 9:27:00 PM
Beautiful as the title, Edward! Well-written. Good write! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 2/19/2010 8:48:00 AM
"This girls a gentle creature I do adore" beautiful write. you have quite a list in so little time! thats awesome.(: a large mind you must have -Always & Forever Lynette
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Date: 2/14/2010 11:34:00 PM
Wow, this was a fun poem to read. Keep it up. Thanks for your kind words on my poem. David
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Date: 2/14/2010 7:19:00 PM
Well, I am so glad the ice queen surrendered. A very sweet tale, Edward! Keep up your writing! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/14/2010 7:11:00 PM
that's beautiful... loved this poem
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