Sweet Home

Mother blows conch shell Dews on holy basil drip smell Sun vermilion in sky day shy Cows return, father chants Om, Peace all over home sweet home

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/24/2015 3:30:00 PM

This winner does speak of a homey comfort..I enjoyed reading this winner.Congrats..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/23/2015 1:18:00 AM

Rajat, Nice win...... LINDA

Skat A

Date: 5/20/2015 7:09:00 PM

Rajat, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN. Enjoyed your Home Sweet Home Entry. Thank you for supporting my contest. ~~SKAT LOVE~~

Ana Espinola Collins

Date: 1/31/2015 10:01:00 AM

A wonderful poem Rajat....nice flow of words. :) Ana

Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/30/2015 1:52:00 AM

A very nice description of the serene comforts of home... Well done, Rajat. Good luck in the contest!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/31/2015 7:32:00 AM

It is a traditional welcome of evening in any typical Hindu Bengali home in rural Bengal.Blowing conch-shell, watering holy basil plant, welcoming cows, chanting mantras/hymns to evening God etc. Nice comments Kelly.God bless you. Love>your friend

Jan Allison

Date: 1/29/2015 3:42:00 PM

lovely rhyme:-) Hugs Jan x

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/31/2015 7:27:00 AM

Nice comments Jan. Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2015 2:09:00 PM

this is really nice!! Nice and homey.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/31/2015 7:27:00 AM

Thank you sweetie

Poesy Relish

Date: 1/29/2015 11:46:00 AM

A very short poem that speaks a lot... well penned friend...nad

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/29/2015 12:07:00 PM

Nice comments Nad. Thank you my lovely friend. God bless you.Your friend Rajat