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Sweat shop

SEwing machine sweat shop the sweat of the brow of the under child, used and cast aside, with a downcast dial, money, greed the devils work, will the rich return, their greed to lurk? reborn AGAIN third world style, a greedy rip-off jerk... Don "Irony " Debbie Duncan I believe karma (as ye sow so shall ye reap) puts you in your earned place!!! due to your nastiness, greed etc. upon rebirth you then, pay for your previous crime, without ever knowing your crime... which defies logic .... but is bloody ironic.... for the same spirit.... will cheat his brother again? until it learns, you cant take the dollar with you at death??? So no need to rob your brother....

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  1. Date: 7/8/2013 12:35:00 AM
    good one Don,,,, ,,,,pay for your previous crime, without ever knowing your crime.. I think you know who you are in your heart and soul ;} thanks for reading my Irony ;}

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 11:35:00 AM
    I don't know about Nigerian style but sowing machine of money is nicely done. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 11:10:00 AM
    grreat to read you again, don... a gripping work that depicts the plight of the abused.. powerful!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 9:19:00 AM
    Don, a great portrayal of the greedy rip-off jerk... The intolerance of these circumstances seethes out of your poem, as it should. Excellent :)