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Swallowed the Sun

Swallowed the sun in attempts to free the fire, dimly lit universe eclipsed 'neath inescapable moons, horizons hued of brackish plastic tea's apathetic indifference, whilst darkly orbiting fated solar systems lost symmetry's balance, ultimately, to relinquish their vitally sanctioned powers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/8/2016 1:52:00 PM
Love the style. "Inescapable moons". very nice
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Paloma P
Date: 10/8/2016 2:14:00 PM
Many thanks, much appreciated.
Date: 10/8/2016 8:44:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work..Without the sun in the right position, the earth would be in chaos..Very creative work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Paloma P
Date: 10/8/2016 8:50:00 AM
Thanks so much Sara, I like your interpretation. It was my pleasure to read you.

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