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Swallow That Pill

I destroy childhoods and tear homes apart. I make you neglect your bills and blacken your heart. I’ll cost you a small fortune. I’m more valuable than gold. No matter how expensive, I’m normally gone before I can even be sold. I’m readily available; you can find me all around. I could be on a back dirt road, or in a bank downtown. I out stay my welcome with the rich and dwell around with the poor. I could move in your neighborhood, maybe even next door. The power I hold is unlike any kind. I can have you falling asleep, act crazy, or just basically lose your mind. If you just try me once, I might just let you go. But, if you come around for seconds, I will own your whole soul. I can make you start thinking, seeming logical to steal and lie. That’s the power in my potion, all just to get you that high. Some users of me commit crimes, some just brake down. Most have to leave me for jail or for an emergency ‘get out of town.’ You’ll lie to your mom, lie straight to her face. Not bating a lash at all the false schemes you just made. I can make your morals foggy and you’ll most definitely lose your way. You’ll transform into a different person than the way you were raised. I take kids from parents and parents from kids. I turn people against God and separate them from their friends. I can be quite needy; I’ll steal your youth and your pride. But, you can never escape me; I’m always by your side. If you try to leave me behind, I will make your life hell. I’ll let the anxiety and shaking take over until you can’t help but fail. In the future you will regret the day you tried me, they always do. Don’t blame this on me alone, you came to me, not I to you. I will be your master, and you will be my slave. If our relationship progresses, I can take you to an early grave. Now that I’ve introduced myself, what will you decide to do? Give me a try or pass? It’s completely up to you. I can deliver more misery than words can ever tell. Swallow that pill and I will lead you towards hell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/27/2014 6:51:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Ashley. I enjoyed reading this first poem you posted. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 7/27/2014 5:50:00 PM
Hi Ashley, once again... This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~
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Date: 7/26/2014 2:34:00 PM
Hi Ashley, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/26/2014 11:40:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Ashley :) - I choose your first very well written poem - Great rhyme - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Ashley Mcdonald
Date: 7/26/2014 11:50:00 AM
Thank you for reading. :)
Date: 7/26/2014 11:39:00 AM
This is amazing Ashley...I really like this personification.. so much truth...Welcome to the soup...Stay for a while we are a lot of fun...hugs Tim
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Ashley Mcdonald
Date: 7/26/2014 11:51:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I am glad you enjoyed it!!! :)

Book: Shattered Sighs