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Surround By Darkness

always surround by darkness trying to find the light in this meanless life, where could i get that sweet taste of light, where will i get my freedom, when all my dreams and hopes will be finally realize, i just want to get out of this darkness, i just want to get a life of happiness, is that so hard to find and get? can someone tell when my dark days will be over? please i need you answer my call, come and help me, please before is too late...

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Date: 7/20/2010 6:10:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your heartfelt poetry with us today Emilio. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/19/2010 9:39:00 AM
Very good Emilio, that's how you should take your inner feeling's out from your chest, grab pen and put down, wish you luck on everything!
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Date: 7/19/2010 8:17:00 AM
there is much light here Emilio, keep writing away from darkness you will find it..Have a nice and wonderful day.-LeeAnn
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Date: 7/19/2010 8:08:00 AM
jejeje thanx im new on this so i try my best
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Date: 7/19/2010 8:06:00 AM
Keep writing the light will come. Thanks for sharing - Jodie Q
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Date: 7/19/2010 8:03:00 AM
Nice piece of work!
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